Whilst this outcome was by no means terrible, I think lack of time and development had a detrimental effect on its outcome - a lot of stuff could have been planned and executed better. I think the middle illustration looks really inconsistant in co-ordination with the other two and whilst I really love the two outer illustrations, I think the general composition really lets it all down which is a shame, because this has been possibly one of my more favourite concepts to work with.
Similar feedback was received in the final crit. Lots of people praised the outer two illustrations yet pointed out lots of suggestions on how to improve the middle - again, expressions, composition, consistency of paintwork all needed to be reviewed and re-done.
I'm hoping as we move onto future modules that I can take this as a lesson and really focus on developing and establishing my finals a lot more before I go ahead to finish them.
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